1

8001

1

RTK 1. Slow down cars action, cars move too fast now. 2. Please, match Cars very well on BG perspective (noted that Cars are not well match on perspective in the beginning of the scene).

1

8002

1

RTK 1. Slow down cars action, cars move too fast now.

1

8003

1

8004

1

8005

1

8006

1

8007

1

8008

1

8009

1

8010

1

8011

1

RTK 1. MA'S OFF MODEL, PLEASE, AVOID VOLUME JIGGLING ON HIM WHOLE SCENE 2. PLEASE, NOTED THAT MA'S IS OFF MODEL WHEN HE LOOKS DOWNS AND WHEN HE MOVES HEAD SIDE TO SIDE (PLEASE, REMAKE MA'S FACE IN FULL WHOLE SCENE IN ORDER TMAKE MA INTO MODEL DESIGN). 3. AVOID HOLD POSE ON MA'S SIDE TO SIDE HEAD ACTION (ADD CUSHION, AND SETTELS ON MA'S ACTION WHOLE SCENE). 4. ADD SLIGHT ACTION ON DOGS (ADD LIB ACTION). KEEP EYES LINES OPEN ON BLINGLING AND EXPRESSION

1

8012

1

RTK 1. ADD CAR AS HC (FUTHER HOOK UP WITH SCENE 05-06-07 (CAR BEHIND VERONICA AND OLD LADY CAR). 2. VERONICA'S OFF MODEL, PLEASE, PLACE VERY WELL VEONICA EYES ON HER FACE (EYES PLACEMENT ARE NOT WELL DONE ACTUALLY). 3. KEEP EYES SHAPE OPEN ON BORED EXPRESSION AND BLINKING.

1

8013

1

RTK 1. ADD SLIGHT ACTION ON DOG, FOLLOWING UP WITH HEAD THE OLD LADY ACTION.

1

8015

1

RTK 1. WRONG HOOK UP ON MA. PLEASE, BE SURE THAT MA'S LEFT HAND IS HOLD UP WHOLE SCENE. 2. TOO BAD COMPOSITION (MA'S SHOULD BE BIGGER THAN NOW---PLEASE, RESPECT PERSPECTIVE) 3. PLEASE, ADD VERONICA ON MA'S SIDE FOR HOOK UP WITH SCENE 08016.

1

8016

1

RTK 1. TOO JERKY ACTION, ADD MORE POWERFULL CUSHION AND MAKE ACTION SMOOTH IN WHOLE SCENE. 2. VERONICA IS OFF MODEL (FACE-EYES), PLEASE REMAKE HER EYES IN FULL WHOLE SCENE FUTHER MAIN DESIGN. 3. AVOID JIGGLING ACTION ON VERONICA'S EYES (WHOLE SCENE). 4. PLEASE, AVOID JIGGLING VOLUME AND JIGGLING SHAPE ON MA'S HEAD (WHOLE SCENE).

1

8017

1

RTK 1. PLEASE, AVOID VOLUME JIGGLING ON BERTIN (HIS VOLUME IS JIGGLING TOO MATCH ) 2. PLEASE , IMPROVE BERTING ACTION FUTHER MY NOTE.

1

8018

1

RTK 1. WRONG EXPRESSION ON BASILIO, HE SHOULD SPEAK BORED (AVOID HAPPY MOUTHS ON HIM IN WHOLE SCENE) 2. MATCH HOOK UP ON BERTIN WITH SC. 18 FINAL POSE. 3. ADD MORE POWERFULL CUSHION AND SETTLES ON BASILIO, ACTION IS TOO HARD AND JERKY NOW (ADD MORE POWERFULLL CUSHION AS WELL).

1

8019

1

8020

1

RTK 1. WRONG HOOK UP WITH SC. 019, PLEASE, MATCH VERY WELL HOOK UP ON BERTIN. 2. TOO POOR AND TOO BAD ANIMATION. PLEASE, REFER TO MY NOTE FOR CORRECTION. (REANIMATE BERTIN IN FULL WHOLE SCENE). 3. MATCH HOOK UP WITH SC. 021

1

8021

1

RTK 1. WRONG HOOK UP WITH SC. 020, PLEASE, MATCH VERY WELL HOOK UP ON BERTIN. 2. TOO POOR AND TOO BAD ANIMATION. PLEASE, REFER TO MY NOTE FOR CORRECTION. (REANIMATE BERTIN IN FULL WHOLE SCENE). 3. EYES ON KIDS LOOKS OFF MODEL, PLEASE, RETOUCH VERY WELL EYES (MOSTLY EYES LOOK SMALL AND OFF SHAPE). 4. TOO BAD POSE ON MA, PLEASE, REMAKE ACTION FUTHER THE MY SAMPLE. 5. MATCH VERY WELL HOOK UP WITH SC. 022 (BASILIO AND MA).

1

8022

1

RTK 1. MAKE HOOK UP ON MA AND BASILIO (MATCH HOOK UP VERY WELL WITH SC. 021) 2.IMPROVE MA'S FINAL POSE FUTHER MY NOTE. 2. PLEASE, ADD STAGGING TIMMING ON CHARACTERS (STAGGING TIMMING ON WALKING ACTION). 3. PLEASE, IMPROVE INTO BORED GESTURE (ON COUPLE ACTION), THE GESTURE IS TOO BAD ACTUALLY.

1

8023

1

RTK 1. EYES ARE OFF MODEL AND SHAPE ON VERONICA AND BASILIO, PLEASE, IMPROVE EYES CONTACT AND BE SURE TO AVOID VOLUME JIGGLING ON EYES (WHOLE SCENE). PLEASE PAY ATTENTION TO PUPILS STYLE AND SIZE AND IMPROVE EYES CONTACT.

1

8024

1

RTK 1. MATCH VERY WELL HOOK UP WITH SCENE 022 (MA) 2. TOO BAD EXPRESSION AND POSE ON MA, PLEASE BE SURE TO REMAKE ACTION FUTHER MY NOTE.

1

8025

1

RTK 1. VOLUME AND LINE are JIGGLING TOO MATCH, PLEASE, BE SURE TO AVOID VOLUME JIGGLIN PROBEM IN WHOLE SCENE. 2. PLEASE, ADD MORE POWERFULL CUSHION ON BASILIO (WHOLE SCENE), ACTION IS TOO JERKY AND HARD ACTUALLY.

1

8026

1

RTK 1. TOO THICK LINE, PLEASE, MAKE LINE THINER IN WHOLE SCENE. 2. MA'S OFF MODEL (HEAD AND FACE STYLE AND SHPE, PLEASE DRAW MA IN MATCH BETTER IN WHOLE SCENE 3. REMAKE PSI-FX FUTHER MY NOTE 4. REMOVE "ZMT" SIGN FROM PSI-FX. 4. IMPROVE MA'S POSE, POSE IS NOT TOO GOOD ACTUALLY. 5. SLOW DOWN PSI-FX APPEARING (IT IS TOO FAST ACTUALLY).

1

8027

1

RTK 1. KIDS ARE OFF PROPORTIONS, REMAKE KIDS IN FULL WHOLE SCENE 2. MATCH KIDS VERY WELL ON BG PERSPECTIVE 3. ACTION IS TOO FAST, SLOW DOWN KIDS WALKING ACTION AND BG ANIMATED PAN. 3. SLOW DOWN BASILIO IN SCENE AND INTO POSE ACTION (ACTION IS TOO FAST ACTUALLY).

1

8028

1

RTK 1. AVOID JIGGLING EYES ON VERONICA (WHOLE SCENE) 2. TOO HARD AND JERKY ACTION ON KIDS WALKING ACTION, IMPROVE STEPPING AND ADD CUSHION ON WALKING ACTION.

1

8029

1

RTK 1. MAKE KIDS WALKING IN SCENE BY PERSPECTIVE, BE SURE TO MAKE THEM COME TO DOOR AND STOP (REFER TO STORYBOARD FOR CORRECTION)….MATCH HOOK UP WITH SCENE 30 POSES 2. POSITIVE/NEGATIVE CATCH SHOULD BE ADDED 3. PLEASE, BE SURE TO ADD LIGHTING ON SKY (ADD LIB ACTION) 4. PLEASE, ADD THREE LEVELS OF CLOUDS AND BE ADD SLIGHT ACTION ON CLOUDS (REFER TO MY NOTE FOR CORRECTION) 5. DO NOT MAKE GROUP WALKING IN LINE, REFER TOMY NOTE FOR CORRECTION.

1

8030

1

RTK 1. MATCH HOOK UP WITH SCENE 029 (KIDS SHOULD BE INTO STOP MATCHING HOOK UP WITH SC. 029). 2. ADD LIGHTING ON SCENE (REFER TO SC. 29 FOR POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE FX STYLE). 3. TOO HARD ACTION, PLEASE, ADD CUSHION ON KIDS IN ORDER TO AVOID THE ACTUAL JERKY ACTION.

1

8031

1

RTK 1. MATCH VERY WELL HOOK UP WITH SCENE 030(MA) 2. TOO BAD EXPRESSION AND EYES CONTACT, PLEASE, IMPROVE EYES CONTACT AND AVOID PUEPILS JIGGLING ACTION IN WHOLE SCENE 3. MA'S OFF MODEL (NECK TO LARGE, EYES OFF STYLE AND HEAD OFF SHAPE,) REDRAW MA IN FULL WHOLE SCENE. 4. MATCH VERY WELL HOOK UP WITH SCENE 032 5 ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE CATCH (ADD LIB ACTION) ON SCENE.

1

8032

1

RTK 1. MATCH VERY WELL HOOK UP WITH SCENE 031 (MA'S EXPRESSION AND POSE). 2. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE CATCH (ADD LIB ACTION) ON SCENE. 2. WRONG REACTION ON KIDS, GROUP SHOULD REACT ATONISHED AND WITH ANTIC RUN OUT SCENE. 3. PLEASE, MAKE MA RUN OUT SCENE COMPLETLY . 4. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE CATCH FOR LIGHTING FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION).

1

8033

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 2. CLOSE LINES ON BERONICA (FOREHEAD HAIR LINES) 3. EYES ON KIDS ARE OFF MODEL AND SHPE, PLEASE, REDRAW EYES AND PUPILS IN FULL WHOLE SCENE.

1

8034

1

RTK 1. ADD SHADOW UNDER CAR (HC) 2. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 3. TOO FAST ACTIONON BALARRASSA, PLEASE, BE SURE TO SLOW DOWN HIS ACTION (WALKING IN ,TURNING AND WALKING OUT), PLEASE BE SURE TO MATCH BALARRASSA PROPORTION (BALARRASSA/BG) IN THE RIGHT WAY (HE BECOME SMALL TOO MUCH, PLEASE, REANIMATE BALARRASSA INTO CORRECT SCALE.

1

8035

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 2. ADD SHADOW UNDER CAR AS HC

1

8036

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 2. EYES ON KIDS ARE OFF MODEL AND SHPE, PLEASE, REDRAW EYES AND PUPILS IN FULL WHOLE SCENE.

1

8037

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 2. ADD SHADOW UNDER CAR AS HC

1

8038

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION).

1

8039

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION).

1

8040

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 2. MA'S IS OFF MODEL (PLEASE NOTED THAT HIS HEAD IS OUT SHAPE) 3. PLEASE, BE SURE TO AVOID TO REPETITIVE ACTION ON MA, PLEASE, IMPROVE ACTION AND ADD MORE POWERFULL ACTION ON MA (WHOLE SCENE).

1

8041

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 2. PLEASE, MATCH KIDS VERY WELL INTO BG PERSPECTIVE (THEY DO NOT MTCH WELL ACTUALLY) 3. PLEASE, ADD CUSHION ON ACTION (ACTION LOOK TOOHARD ACTUALLY) 4. ENLARGE KIDS (KIDS LOOK TOO SMALL IN RELATION WITH BG ACTUALLY). 3. WRONG PLACE ON MARCO ANTONIO HE SHOULD HAVE HOOK UP WITH SC. 43 START POSE.

1

8042

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 2. REMOVE GLOBES FROM BASILIO (HE SHOULD NOT BRING GLOBES ANYTIME).

1

8043

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION).

1

8044

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 2. WRONG HOOK UP ON BASILIO , HE SHOULD WALK INTO POSE FOOR HOOK UP WITH SC. 42. 3. WRONG POSE ON BASILIO, HE SHOULD SIT ON GROUND FUTHER STORYBOARD PANEL. PLEASE, MATCH BG AND ADD TREE FOR HOOK UP.

1

8045

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 2. KIDS HAVE TOO JERKY ACTION, ADD Ib and slow down action, please, be sure to slow down action a bit. 3. Too hard action on VERONICA, PLEASE, MAKE VERONICA ACTION MORE SLIGHTLY THAN NOW (ACTUALLY SHE TURN TOO HARD).

1

8046

1

RTK 1. ADD POSITIVE/NEGATIVE FX ACTION (ADD LIB ACTION). 2. Tramp door is missed, please, add tramp action (refer to storyboar panel.

1

8047

1

8048

1

8049

1

8050

1

RTK 1. ADD DARTS IN SCENE ACTION (ACTION IS MISSED IN AVI).

1

8051

1

RTK 1. ADD CUSHION ON KIDS ACTION 2. PLEASE, RE-RENDER SCENE, IT LOOKS TOO BAD AND ADD CAMERA ACTION.

1

8052

1

RTK 1. MATCH KIDS ACTION VERY WELL ON BG PERSPECTIVE 2. MATCH VERY WELL THE CIRCULAR KNIFES INTO BG PERSPECTIVE (MATCH THREE CIRUCLAR KNIWFES AWAY FROM CAMERA ACTION….REFER TO MY NOTE FOR CORRECTION).

1

8053

1

RTK 1. PLEASE, IMPROVE PLANT INTO SCENE ACTION (ADD FAST TO SLOW AND LEANS TOWARD CAMERA)…REFER TO MY NOTE FOR CORRECTION (PLEASE, ADD MORE CARTOONY ACTION AND TIMMING TO PLANT IN WHOLE SCENE). 3. Match hook up wih scene 054

1

8054

1

RTK 1. PLEASE, IMPROVE BITE ACTION ON PLANT (ADD SLIGHT DISTORTION ON BITTING) 2. MATCH VERY WELL HOOK UP WITH SCENE 053

1

8055

1

RTK 1. WRONG HOOK UP WITH SCENE 054, PLEASE, MAKE THE PLANT MOVE AWAY CAMERA FUTHER MY NOTE 2. PLEASE, ADD MORE ACTIVE TIMMING ON PLANT SHAKING ACTION.

1

8056

1

8057

1

RTK 1. PLEASE, ADD BASE ON PLANT (BASE SHOULD FALL DOWN AS WELL) 2. PLEASE, IMPROVE SHAKING ACTION ON PLANT AND FALLING DOWN ACTION ON PLANT (ADD MORE CARTOONY TIMMING). 3. ADD OBJET ON PLANT MOUTH (WHOLE SCENE), FOR HOOK UP WITH SCENE 055. 4. ADD KIDS TURNING TOWARDS CAMERA AFTER PLANT FALLS OUT SCENE (FOR HOOK UP WITH SCENE 59).

1

8058

1

8059

1

8060

1

8061

1

8062

1

8063

1

RTK 1. TOO BAD EYES CONTACT, POINTING POSE AND ACTION ON MA, PLEASE REFER TO MY NOTE FOR CORRECTION 2. PLEASE, ADD MORE PORWERFULL SETTLES INTO POSE ON MA'S POINTING GESTURE ACTION.

1

8064

1

8065

1

RTK 1. MAKE TURNING ACTION MORE SMOOTH 2. AVOID TOO REPETITIVE ACTION ON BERTIN DIALOGUE ACTION (H E MOVES THE HEAS TOO MUCH).

1

8066

1

8067

1

8068

1

8069

1

RTK 1. TOO HARD ACTION, PLEASE, BE SURE TO ADD SETTLE INTO POSE TO BERTIN. 2. MATCH VERY WELL BG OL ON CORRECT PERSPECTIVE.

1

8070

1

RTK 1. TOO HARD ACTION, PLEASE, BE SURE TO ADD ANTIC AND SETTLES INTO POSE ON BOTH CHARACTERS 2. MAKE EACH CAHRACTER IN SEPARATED LEVEL (NO MATCH LINES ON CHARACTERS). 3. DIALOGUE ACTION IS MISSED ON CHK1 AVI, PLEASE ADD DIALOGUE ACTION FUTHER x-SHEET. 4. PLEASE, BE SURE TO DRAW KIDS EYES AND MATCH EYES CONTACT VERY WELL 5. ADD STAGGING TIMMING ON CHARACTERS.

1

8071

1

RTK 1. TOO HARD ACTION, PLEASE, BE SURE TO ADD ANTIC AND SETTLES INTO POSE BERTING 2. MAKE SURE TO MAKE THE RIM LITE IN SEPARATED LEVEL. 3. SLOW DOWN AND ADD SETTLES INTO POSE ON BERTIN TURNING ACTION (ACTION LOOK TOO FAST ACTUALLY AND TOO JERKY).

1

8072

1

RTK 1. TOO JERKY AND HARD ACTION ON CHARACTERS, PLEASE, ADD POWERFULLCUSHION AND SETTLES INTO POSE 2. EYES ARE OFF MODEL AND SHAPE (PLEASE, REDRAW EYES IN FULL WHOLE SCENE). 3. MA'S OFF MODEL (HAND IS OFF STYLE AND SHAPE, PLEASE, REDRAW HAND IN FULL WHOLE SCENE). 4. VERONICA IS OFF MODEL AND STYLE (PLEASE, REDRAW HER IN FULL WHOLE SCENE).

1

8073

1

8074

1

RTK 1. TOO HARD ACTION ON MA, PLEASE, ADD MUCH POWERFULL CUSHION AND SETTLES INTO POSE ON MA 2. PLEASE, MAKE TURNING ACTION MORE SMOOTH 3. MA'S OFF MODEL (EYES STYLE AND SHPE---ALSO PUPILS), REDRAW EYES AND PUPILS IN FULL WHOLE SCENE.

1

8075

1

RTK 1. TOO HARD ACTION ON VERONICA, PLEASE, ADD MUCH POWERFULL CUSHION AND SETTLES INTO POSE ON MA 2. PLEASE, MAKE TURNING ACTION MORE SMOOTH 3. MA'S OFF MODEL (EYES STYLE AND SHPE---ALSO PUPILS), REDRAW EYES AND PUPILS IN FULL WHOLE SCENE. 4. AVOID TO REPETITIVE ACTION ON VERONICA (HEAD UP/DOWN REPATS TOO MUCH TIMES).

1

8076

1

RTK 1. TOO HARD ACTION ON BERTIN, ADD MORE POWERFULL ANTIC, CUSHION AND SETTLES INTO POSE (please, do not follow to much the storyboard poses, DO NOT USE THE STORYBOARD AS LAYOUT MANY PROBLEMS CAME BECAUSE YOU PHOTOCOPY THE SOTRYBOARD AS LAYOUT) 2. TOO BAD POINTNG ACTION AND POSE ACTION, PLEASE, REMAKE THE LAYOUT AND RE-ANIMATE SCENE IN ORDER TO IMPROVE THE POSES ON BERTIN.

1

8077

1

8078

1

RTK 1. TOO HARD ACTION ON VERONICA, PLEASE, ADD MUCH POWERFULL CUSHION AND SETTLES INTO POSE ON MA 2. PLEASE, MAKE TURNING ACTION MORE SMOOTH 3. MA'S OFF MODEL (EYES STYLE AND SHPE---ALSO PUPILS), REDRAW EYES AND PUPILS IN FULL WHOLE SCENE.

1

8079

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